CLASS WORK:

  • Review faulty parallelism sentences
  • Review multiple choice practice
  • Methods of Writing ppt. (take notes)

HOMEWORK:


This assignment is for everyone. Title is Parallelism 2
  • Determine whether the sentences below are parallel or not. If they are, write C on your paper. If not, correct the error in parallelism.
    • They decided that the needed a change, that they could afford a new house, and wanted to move to Arizona.
    • I like playing baseball, reading about sports, and tacos.
    • Let me remind you not only of your duty but of your promise.
    • Hawaii is famous for its beaches that are beautiful, warm climate, and exotic atmosphere.
    • Before leaving for work, Teresa exercises, eats breakfast, and the dog is fed.

This assignment is for those who saw the late post last night. TITLE your assignment: Parallelism #1
Determine whether the sentences below are parallel or not. If they are, write C on your paper. If not, correct the error in parallelism.


    • To design her own clothes and making them are two of Rebecca's goals.
    • Not only are migrant workers exploited in the Southwest but also in other parts of the Sunbelt.
    • Jack Paar, an early host of the "Tonight Show", was a dazzling interviewer and who was controversial.
    • Even at an early age, Raquel could walk on her hands, do forward flips, and showed excellent balance.
    • Although modeling is often perceived as an easy job, it requires talent, patience, and models must have stamina.

  • View the following essay. In the DISCUSSION forum, offer feedback to this student
.An AP Essay From One of Your Classmates